Module 11 Way of life 书面表达 专练（含解析）外研版版英语八年级上册
1．书面表达
你的笔友Charles 暑假要到中国来。他想了解一下中国人的生活习惯，请你就以下几方面回一封邮件向他介绍一下：中国交通右侧通行、吃饭时用筷子、不一定把所有食物吃完、临走时礼貌道别。(70词左右)
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2．书面表达
假设某杂志社要举办题为“My favourite festival”的征文比赛。请你根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的短文。
内容： 1.你最喜爱的节日及理由；
2．你在节日期间喜欢做的事情。
My favourite festival
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3．书面表达
假如你是王昆.你的美国网友Tom对中国的传统节日‘.春节”非常感兴趣，请你以“My Favorite Festival”为题.写一封E-mail.,给他做一介绍。
1.要点包括:节日简介、节日准备、节日活动等;
2.字数要求:10。字左右。
3.提示:the Spring Festival, traditional, get together, clean up, be dressed in...
△Subject: My Favorite Festival
From: Wang Kun
Dear Tom,
Wang Kun
4．大明要去一个美国家庭吃饭。请你根据以下提示告诉他美国的餐桌礼仪和风俗习惯。
1. 可以带一件小礼物，如一束花或者一瓶酒(如果那个家庭喜欢喝酒的话)。
2. 应当按时或者稍迟5～10分钟到达,不要早到。如果将要迟到15分钟以上的话,要打电话告诉他们。
3. 在餐桌旁要尽量随意一些。如果不知道怎样做，就问问旁边的人。
4. 如果喜欢主人准备的食物，要说出来。当然，还应当感谢主人的款待，过后寄一张卡片或表达谢意的纸条也是一个好主意。
参考词汇：knife刀子；fork叉；spoon汤匙；uncomfortable不舒服的；nervous紧张的；host男主人；hostess女主人。
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5．书面表达
暑假就要到了，假设你们学校的外籍教师Miss Green要到青岛旅游度假，她向你(Zhang Ming)了解青岛一年四季的气候情况和人们在夏天所进行的体育活动。请你为她写一封信作简要的介绍，内容包括：
1．青岛位于中国东部，在美丽的海边，这里春天暖和多风，夏天不太热、经常下雨，秋天凉爽，冬天较冷，最低气温在零下4度。
2．夏天是去游泳和划船的最好时间。这里的沙滩很好，适合打沙滩排球(beach volleyball) 。
要求：不少于70词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Green,
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I think you can have a good time there. Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Ming
6．书面表达
61. 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Daniel正在研究中国的节日文化，他通过电子邮件向你咨询有关中国春节的信息，请根据邮件内容，给Daniel写一封回信。
注意：（1）词数：80左右。邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；（2）提示词：set off firecrackers放鞭炮；lucky money红包
7．书面表达
假设你叫王红,你的好友李扬在学习英语时遇到困难,请根据表格内容给李扬写一封70词左右的信。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
李扬的问题 ( problems) 1.当别人说英语时,他有时听不懂
2总是忘记许多新单词
3.害怕写作文( composition)
4.常犯语法错误
你的建议 (advice) 1.尽量听大意( main idea)而不是每个单词
2.反复练习
3交一个笔友
4向老师和同学寻求帮助
Dear Li Yang，
I know it's not easy for you to learn English, but I have some advice that may help you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Wing Hong
参考答案：
1．Dear Charles,
I am happy to hear that you will come to China. Welcome! There are lots of good manners in China. You must remember these before you come here.
First you should remember that you must drive on the right in China. When you have dinner with Chinese people, you should say hello to the host. And at table you’d better use chopsticks instead of a knife and fork. You needn’t finish all the food on the plate. It’s polite to say goodbye to the host when you leave.
Best wishes,
Wang Hong
【详解】这是一篇介绍中国风俗的文章，英语作文要注意人称和时态，这篇文章主要用一般现在时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。
2．My favourite festival
Like most children, I like the Spring Festival best because it's the most important festival in China. It's just as important as Christmas in Western countries. People always celebrate it with their families. They usually have a long holiday so they can go home if they work far away from their home town.I like to set off fireworks with friends during the Spring Festival. Besides, I can get presents and lucky money from my parents and relatives. I also enjoy the long holiday with all my friends.
【分析】这是一篇话题作文，话题是My favourite festival。首先认真审题和阅读提示：1.你最喜爱的节日及理由；2．你在节日期间喜欢做的事情。字数80词左右。根据内容可知此文时态主要用一般现在时。其次，列好提纲，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写，语法错误（时态，主谓一致等）。
【详解】列提纲：1. 像大多数孩子一样，我最喜欢春节，因为它是中国最重要的节日。（Like most children, I like the Spring Festival best because it's the most important festival in China.）2. 它和西方国家的圣诞节一样重要。（It's just as important as Christmas in Western countries.）3. 人们总是和家人一起庆祝。（People always celebrate it with their families.）4. 他们通常有很长的假期，所以他们可以回家，如果他们远离家乡工作。(They usually have a long holiday so they can go home if they work far away from their home town.) 5. 春节期间我喜欢和朋友一起燃放烟花。（I like to set off fireworks with friends during the Spring Festival.）6. 此外，我可以从父母和亲戚那里得到礼物和压岁钱。（Besides, I can get presents and lucky money from my parents and relatives.）7. 我也和我所有的朋友一起享受长假。（I also enjoy the long holiday with all my friends.）
【点睛】（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。（2）根据内容确定短文时态，学生要运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型。（3）列好提纲和要点，及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
3．One possible version：
The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival to the Chinese people.
Several days before the new year, we begin to prepare for it. My parents buy meat, fish and vegetables. Houses are cleaned up.
On the eve of the new year, the whole family get together and have a big dinner. After the meal we watch “the Spring Evening” on TV until twelve o’clock. On the first day of the new year, each of us is dressed in new clothes. When meeting others outside, we say “Happy New Year” to each other. We pay new year calls to friends and relatives. That day my parents and relatives give “Red-bags” (money) to us children. All of us have a great time.
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，描述中国的传统节日春节。本题没有给出具体材料, 只给出了几个问题，需要自己先确定写作内容,然后在动笔写作.选取材料时,注意选择自己熟悉的内容.在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性。结合材料可知本文主要是一般过去时态，人称是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题。写作中适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】本文行文流畅，语言规范。还使用了一些固定句型及短语，为文章增色不少。如prepare for，the whole family get together and have a big dinner等等。
4．例文：
Dear Daming,
It’s a good idea to take a small gift when you go to have a dinner in an American family. Flowers are always nice, or you might bring a bottle of wine if you know that the family like to drink it.
You should arrive on time or five to ten minutes late. Don’ t get there early. If you’ re going to be more than fifteen minutes late, you should call and tell them.
Try to be free at the dinner table. If you don’t know how to use the knife, fork, or spoon, just watch the other people, and follow them. If you still have no idea of what to do, don’t be shy about asking the person next to you. It’s better to ask than to be quiet and feel uncomfortable and nervous.
If you like the food, say so. Of course, you should thank the host and hostess for the meal and their kindness. It’s also a good idea to send a card or a thank-you note the following day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，主要说明美国的餐桌礼仪和风俗习惯。在写作时，根据提示分四点来展开论述：第一段阐述去美国家庭做客带礼物；第二段阐述到达的时间；第三段阐述就餐时要随意；第四段阐述要表达感谢。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第二人称来说明要点；时态采用一般现在时为主；描述礼仪和风俗习惯时可以介绍具体的事例；要点需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
5．Dear_Miss_Green，
Qingdao is in the east of China and it's near the beautiful sea. It's warm and windy in spring. It's not too hot in summer. And it rains a lot. The weather is cool in autumn. It's very cold in winter. The lowest temperature can be －4℃.Summer is the best time to go swimming and boating. The beach is very good and beach volleyball is the most popular sport there.
I_think_you_can_have_a_good_time_there.Best_wishes!
Yours，
Zhang_Ming
【详解】这是一篇要求介绍青岛一年四季的气候情况和人们在夏天所进行的体育活动的信件。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
6．Dear Daniel,
How are you You ask me something about the Spring Festival. And I am very glad to introduce it for you.
Firstly, the reason why we celebrate it is that it is a new beginning of a year, and everything needs to be clean and new to welcome the new year. Secondly, we usually celebrate it on the first day of the year according to the Lunar calendar, and all family members get together and have a big deal. Thirdly, at this day many people will be allowed to set off firecrackers. In addition, during this holiday ,we will visit our relatives and neighbors. Children will get lucky money from their parents or relatives. Finally, the most traditional food is dumpling, which may be different between south and north of China.
I hope my information will help you, which will make me very excited.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，对Daniel的电子邮件中所提问题的回答就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态和一般将来时来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
7．Dear Li Yang
I know it's not easy for you to learn English, but I have some advice that may help you.
First of all, when someone speaks English, you should try your best to understand the main idea, not every word. Then if you always forget new words, you should practise them more. What’s more, if you are afraid of writing compositions, you can make a pen friend whom you can send emails to. Finally, if you want to improve your grammar, you should ask your teacher and classmates for help.
I hope you will improve your English soon.
Yours,
Wang Hong
【分析】这是一封书信，通过对好友李扬在学习英语时遇到四个问题的描述，提出相应的四个解决措施。信的格式已经给出，收信人和寄信人都写好了。首句也给出了，并且根据首句的格式，信的正文全部顶格写即可。
【详解】初中英语作文一般分为三个段落。
交代写作目的。本文即交代出写信的原因，这一部分内容在题目中已经给出了即I know it's not easy for you to learn English, but I have some advice that may help you.所以无需赘述。
文章的主体部分。本文即翻译李扬遇到的问题并给出对应的建议，每个问题对应一个建议。这一部分注意四个问题和建议之间要有相应的连词，不能把四句话罗列在一起，这样显得很混乱，容易失分。常见的连词有首先first of all, firstly, at first；接下来secondly, then, next, what’s more, what else；最后finally, at last, in the end等。
信的结尾一般是同样的内容：对收信人美好的祝愿和希望很快能够收到地方的回信等。
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