刷题01 名校材料写作满分范文10篇（原卷版）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、材料作文
1．（2021秋·江苏盐城·九年级统考期中）某英文网站正在开展以“Good Habits”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写—篇短文投稿，谈谈日常生活或学习中你是如何培养好习惯的，以及这些好习惯带给你的益处。
提示问题：
What is your good habit
What did you do to develop it
….
As we all know everyone has his own habits.
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2．（2021秋·江苏淮安·九年级统考期中）亲爱的同学们，初三的你生活紧张而又忙碌，相信你的身边一定会有这样的一位好朋友：与你一起学习，一起玩耍，一起感受成长的快乐与痛苦……假如你是Lily，请根据所给提示，以“My good friend—Millie”为题，一篇短文。
介绍 九年级，生于猴年……
最喜欢黄色，因为……
有创造力……
问题 认为父母亲……
爱好演讲，她想参加演讲比赛的选拔；父母认为……；她不知……
建议 1.……
2.……
要求：
1. 文中必须包含表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，字迹工整。词数大约90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。
My good friend—Millie
My name is Lily. I have a good friend called Millie. Now let me tell you something about her.
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3．（2021秋·江苏宿迁·九年级统考期中）在生活当中，每个人都有遇到困难的时候，除了坚强面对以外，我们有时也会得到别人的帮助，这也带给了我们信心和力量。请以“Help from Others”为题写一篇短文，描述受到别人帮助从而走出困境的经历。
提示：
1）谈谈你遇到过什么样的困难；
2）描述别人是怎样帮助你的；
3）你有什么感想？
要求：
1）根据提示，合理表达，适当发挥；
2）主题鲜明，条理清晰，行文连贯，段落分明，书写规范；
3）字数100左右；题目、开头已经给出，不计入字数；
4）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Help from Others
Everyone has some hard times in life. Sometimes we can get help from others. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．（2021秋·江苏扬州·九年级统考期中）假设你有一个名叫Tom的好朋友，进入初三后他变化了很多，请根据以下表格内容介绍一下他在学习、生活中的成长变化，写一篇100词左右的作文。
简介 15岁，九年级学生。 最喜欢橙色，因为橙色可以使人振作。
过去 有太多家庭作业，别无选择只能熬夜。 不仅常玩电脑游戏而且拒绝和父母交流。
现在 有条理，仔细计划每一天…… 很勤奋，在学习上对自己严格要求…… 很自信，参加了校篮球队的选拔并且证明了……
将来 想成为一个……（理由）
注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实的校名、人名。
（2）内容完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯。
（3）100词左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Tom is my good friend._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．（2022秋·江苏南通·九年级统考期中）假如最近你们学校组织了”评选优秀团员”活动，你班王明被选为优秀团员。请你根据下表信息提示，写一篇介绍王明的短文。
基本情况 王明；九（2）班；中等身高；2007年9月出生；
个人爱好 喜欢音乐，曾经创作了具有地方特色的音乐；喜欢观看纪录片，因为……（自拟内容）
优秀事迹 上周为希望工程捐款； ……（自拟内容）
职业梦想 具有表演天赋；想当一名演员；曾经在校园剧（campus plays）中扮演主角，并获奖。 ……（自拟内容）
注意：1. 语言规范，信息完整，结构连贯，书写工整。
2. 内容必须包括表格中所有信息，并作适当的发挥。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
4. 词数90左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Wang Ming is a student in Class 2, Grade 3. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I admire him very much. I think he is an excellent League member.
6．（2022秋·江苏盐城·九年级统考期中）你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“One thing I feel proud of”的征文比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇短文参赛。
1. What did you do to make you feel proud of yourself 2. What have you learned from the experience ...
注意事项：
1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Everyone has done something that he is proud of. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．（2022秋·江苏苏州·九年级苏州中学校考期中）每段人生都有永不褪色的回忆。你学习，运动，旅游，交友，玩耍……其中有快乐，有悲伤，有趣味，有感动，有后悔，有惊喜，有骄傲……
请以“An unforgettable thing”为题，写一篇记叙文，将你的故事与我们分享。
内容包括：
1. What happened to you (what, when, who, where… )
2. How was it going on /What did you do then
3. How did you feel at last /What did you get from this experience . . .
注意：1. 词数100，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
An unforgettable thing
Everyone has his or her own unforgettable experiences, so do I!
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8．（2022秋·江苏·九年级统考期中）生活中我们有许许多多的第一次，比如第一次骑车、第一次做饭、第一次旅行……人生中的第一次是一种勇敢的尝试，在此过程中，我们会碰到挫折和困难，它们像一串串脚印，永驻在我们成长的道路上。请以“My first ________”为题用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
a.请先将标题填写完整；
b.分享你的第一次尝试的经历；
c.你的感悟。
注意:
（1）词数100左右；
（2）文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息；
（3）照抄阅读语篇不得分。
My first ________
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9．（2022春·江苏南通·九年级校联考期中）树立自我保护意识，健康快乐地成长是每个青少年的必修课。下面是某地关心下一代工作委员会为青少年编写的《青少年自我保护 健康成长手册》的部分内容。作为一名中学生， 请您写一篇相关主题的文章，内容包括：
①陈述你是怎样践行手册中提及的三条事项的；
②补充至少一条你认为重要的其他事项。
要求：
1.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3.词数在90个左右，文章开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数。
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.
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In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.
10．（2022秋·江苏淮安·九年级统考期中）近年来，“双减”政策在很多学校得到了落实。“双减”实施后，自律者优秀， 懒散者出局。假如你是九 (1)班的李明，请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你是如何进行自我管理的。内容需包括以下要点：
1. 制定学习计划 学校课程、课外阅读、练习拓展；……
2. 合理时间安排 早、中、晚、周末；……
3. 养成良好习惯 早睡早起、坚持锻炼；……
要求：
1. 词数在80~100词，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括所有要点，并适当发挥，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
To be an excellent student, self-management is quite important._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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刷题01 名校材料写作满分范文10篇（解析版）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、材料作文
1．（2021秋·江苏盐城·九年级统考期中）某英文网站正在开展以“Good Habits”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写—篇短文投稿，谈谈日常生活或学习中你是如何培养好习惯的，以及这些好习惯带给你的益处。
提示问题：
What is your good habit
What did you do to develop it
….
As we all know everyone has his own habits.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Good Habits
As we all know everyone has his own habits. Good habits are important in our lives. They influence us in many ways. I think good habits make me better.
I used to go to bed very late and I felt tired and sleepy the next day. I couldn’t pay attention to what my teachers said. Later, my mother asked me to go to bed before 10 o’clock and little by little. I have developed this habit. Now I feel much better.
From my experience, I know having good habits is so important that I will develop more good habits. And good habits will also make me better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点均已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏；适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的，好习惯能够是我们更好；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，详细介绍自己的好习惯是如何一步步形成的；
第三步；书写结语，描述好习惯的优点。
[亮点词汇]
①used to 过去常常
②pay attention to 注意
③better and better 越来越好
[高分句型]
①I couldn’t pay attention to what my teachers said.(宾语从句)
②From my experience, I know having good habits is so important that I will develop more good habits.(宾语从句；动名词作主语；so…that)
2．（2021秋·江苏淮安·九年级统考期中）亲爱的同学们，初三的你生活紧张而又忙碌，相信你的身边一定会有这样的一位好朋友：与你一起学习，一起玩耍，一起感受成长的快乐与痛苦……假如你是Lily，请根据所给提示，以“My good friend—Millie”为题，一篇短文。
介绍 九年级，生于猴年……
最喜欢黄色，因为……
有创造力……
问题 认为父母亲……
爱好演讲，她想参加演讲比赛的选拔；父母认为……；她不知……
建议 1.……
2.……
要求：
1. 文中必须包含表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，字迹工整。词数大约90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。
My good friend—Millie
My name is Lily. I have a good friend called Millie. Now let me tell you something about her.
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【答案】例文
My good friend—Millie
My name is Lily. I have a good friend called Millie. Now let me tell you something about her. She is a ninth grade student. She was born in the year of the monkey. She is very creative. In her free time, she likes doing DIY. She is crazy about decorating her bedroom. Yellow is her favourite colour because yellow represents wisdom and success. She thinks her parents are too strict with her. She likes to speak. She wants to take part in the speech contest. But her parents think it’s a waste of time. She doesn’t know what to do. I think it’s good for her that her parents are strict with her. She must first prove herself with practical actions. First of all, she should study well. If she has any ideas, she can communicate with her parents more. I believe her parents will understand her.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要以“My good friend—Millie”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“简单介绍自己的好朋友Millie”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“个人介绍、问题和建议”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be crazy about对……痴狂
②be strict with对……严格
③communicate with和……交流
[高分句型]
①Yellow is her favourite colour because yellow represents wisdom and success.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②If she has any ideas, she can communicate with her parents more.（if引导的条件状语从句）
3．（2021秋·江苏宿迁·九年级统考期中）在生活当中，每个人都有遇到困难的时候，除了坚强面对以外，我们有时也会得到别人的帮助，这也带给了我们信心和力量。请以“Help from Others”为题写一篇短文，描述受到别人帮助从而走出困境的经历。
提示：
1）谈谈你遇到过什么样的困难；
2）描述别人是怎样帮助你的；
3）你有什么感想？
要求：
1）根据提示，合理表达，适当发挥；
2）主题鲜明，条理清晰，行文连贯，段落分明，书写规范；
3）字数100左右；题目、开头已经给出，不计入字数；
4）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Help from Others
Everyone has some hard times in life. Sometimes we can get help from others. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Help from Others
Everyone has some hard times in life. Sometimes we can get help from others. I remember when I was in Grade 8. I was not good at Chinese. Luckily, whenever I was in trouble, my Chinese teacher Mr Tan always gave me a hand. In class he encouraged me to practice speaking in front of others. After class, he advised me to read more Chinese books. He was willing to communicate with me at any time. It worked! My Chinese improved little by little. Now Chinese is my favorite subject. More importantly, I have more confidence in myself.
I’m very thankful for what he did. I find that it is important to help others. It may change their life. So when there is someone that needs my help, I will be ready to lend a hand.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意以第一人称描述自身经历并表达感想，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，叙述自己曾遇到的困难和获得的帮助；
第二步，表达感悟和启发。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②in trouble处于困境
③give sb a hand帮助某人
④be willing to do sth愿意做某事
⑤little by little逐渐地
⑥be ready to do sth乐于做某事
[高分句型]
①I find that it is important to help others.（that引导的宾语从句）
②So when there is someone that needs my help, I will be ready to lend a hand.（when引导的时间状语从句）
4．（2021秋·江苏扬州·九年级统考期中）假设你有一个名叫Tom的好朋友，进入初三后他变化了很多，请根据以下表格内容介绍一下他在学习、生活中的成长变化，写一篇100词左右的作文。
简介 15岁，九年级学生。 最喜欢橙色，因为橙色可以使人振作。
过去 有太多家庭作业，别无选择只能熬夜。 不仅常玩电脑游戏而且拒绝和父母交流。
现在 有条理，仔细计划每一天…… 很勤奋，在学习上对自己严格要求…… 很自信，参加了校篮球队的选拔并且证明了……
将来 想成为一个……（理由）
注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实的校名、人名。
（2）内容完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯。
（3）100词左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Tom is my good friend._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Tom is my good friend. He has changed a lot. Let me introduce what he has changed.
He is 15 years old boy. And he is student in a middle school. He is in Class 1, Grade 9. Yellow is his favorite color because he thinks that yellow can cheer him up. He used to has a lot of homework. He has no choice but to stay up late. He used to play computer games, and he refused to talk with his parents. But now he wants to live a good day. He makes a good plan every day. And he studies hard, he is strict with his study. He is more confident than before. He joins the school basketball team.
He wants to be a famous basketball player all over the world. Because he loves basketball very much and he wants to be famous.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据表格介绍好朋友Tom的过去和现在，以及未来想成为的人，要求内容完整，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来介绍好朋友；时态采用一般现在时为主；用一般过去时来介绍好朋友的过去；用一般将来时介绍未来想成为的人。文章可分三段：第一段引出下文，表明介绍朋友的变化；第二段对Tom做一下简介，再介绍Tom的过去和现在；最后一段介绍Tom将来想成为一个什么样的人。介绍好朋友时，应叙述完整，描写细致；保证条理清晰。
5．（2022秋·江苏南通·九年级统考期中）假如最近你们学校组织了”评选优秀团员”活动，你班王明被选为优秀团员。请你根据下表信息提示，写一篇介绍王明的短文。
基本情况 王明；九（2）班；中等身高；2007年9月出生；
个人爱好 喜欢音乐，曾经创作了具有地方特色的音乐；喜欢观看纪录片，因为……（自拟内容）
优秀事迹 上周为希望工程捐款； ……（自拟内容）
职业梦想 具有表演天赋；想当一名演员；曾经在校园剧（campus plays）中扮演主角，并获奖。 ……（自拟内容）
注意：1. 语言规范，信息完整，结构连贯，书写工整。
2. 内容必须包括表格中所有信息，并作适当的发挥。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
4. 词数90左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Wang Ming is a student in Class 2, Grade 3. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I admire him very much. I think he is an excellent League member.
【答案】例文：
Wang Ming is a student in Class 2, Grade 3. He is of medium height. He was born in September, 2007. He has some hobbies. He likes music. He once wrote music with local colour. He likes watching documentaries because he can learn a lot of useful information from them.
He is generous and helpful and he has done several good things. Last month he donated his pocket money to Project Hope. He also donated blood many times to help people who are in trouble. He even decided to donate his body for medical research.
He has some great dreams. He once played the leading role in campus plays and won good awards. Because he has acting talent, he wants to be an actor. …
I admire him very much. I think he is an excellent League member.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态是“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的。开头已给出；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“基本情况、个人爱好、优秀事迹、职业梦想”等几个方面详细描述王明的优秀品质；
第三步，书写结语。结尾已给出。
[亮点词汇]
①be of medium height是中等身高
② music with local colour具有地方特色的音乐
③donate money to捐钱给……
[高分句型]
①He likes watching documentaries because he can learn a lot of useful information from them.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②He also donated blood many times to help people who are in trouble.（动词不定式作目的状语；定语从句）
6．（2022秋·江苏盐城·九年级统考期中）你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“One thing I feel proud of”的征文比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇短文参赛。
1. What did you do to make you feel proud of yourself 2. What have you learned from the experience ...
注意事项：
1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Everyone has done something that he is proud of. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Everyone has done something that he is proud of. I won’t forget the first time I traveled alone forever.
Last summer vacation, I went to the summer camp. At first, I was kind of afraid because it was the first time I felt lonely. But my parents encouraged me a lot. Then I met many kids and we became good friends. We went to climb the mountain together happily and helped each other on the way. At last, we got to the top of the mountain. We had a picnic there. We were all very excited. And I was proud of myself because I could travel alone without my parents.
I have learned a lot from this experience. I know how to deal with problems when I have them.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，具体介绍你做了什么让你为自己感到骄傲；
第二步，介绍你从中获得了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①at first起初
②on the way在路上
③be proud of为……自豪
[高分句型]
①At first, I was kind of afraid because it was the first time I felt lonely.（because引导原因状语从句）
②I know how to deal with problems when I have them.（when引导时间状语从句）
7．（2022秋·江苏苏州·九年级苏州中学校考期中）每段人生都有永不褪色的回忆。你学习，运动，旅游，交友，玩耍……其中有快乐，有悲伤，有趣味，有感动，有后悔，有惊喜，有骄傲……
请以“An unforgettable thing”为题，写一篇记叙文，将你的故事与我们分享。
内容包括：
1. What happened to you (what, when, who, where… )
2. How was it going on /What did you do then
3. How did you feel at last /What did you get from this experience . . .
注意：1. 词数100，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
An unforgettable thing
Everyone has his or her own unforgettable experiences, so do I!
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【答案】例文
An unforgettable thing
Everyone has his or her own unforgettable experiences, so do I! Let me share mine.
There are a lot of unforgettable moments in my middle school life. How time flies! Three years of middle school life has come to an end. During the three years, I have known many kind teachers and helpful classmates. Thanks to them, my middle school life is meaningful and colourful. One of the most unforgettable experiences happened in Grade 8. I worked hard to prepare an English Speech. However, things didn’t went on as smoothly as expected. I fell ill a week before the speech. I coughed so badly that I could hardly speak. I felt worried and helpless. It was my dearest English teacher that helped me get out of trouble. She told me to calm down and looked after me carefully. To me, my English teacher is like my family who care me and love me. Because of the experience, I have decided to be a teacher like my English teacher when I grow up.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”，“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“An unforgettable thing”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“分享自己难忘的经历”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“发生了什么、情况如何、做了什么、感觉如何以及从这次经历中得到了什么”几个方面重点介绍。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of许多
②come to an end结束
③Thanks to由于，幸亏
④get out of trouble逃离困境，摆脱麻烦
[高分句型]
①I coughed so badly that I could hardly speak.（so...that...引导的结果状语从句）
②Because of the experience, I have decided to be a teacher like my English teacher when I grow up.（when引导的时间状语从句）
8．（2022秋·江苏·九年级统考期中）生活中我们有许许多多的第一次，比如第一次骑车、第一次做饭、第一次旅行……人生中的第一次是一种勇敢的尝试，在此过程中，我们会碰到挫折和困难，它们像一串串脚印，永驻在我们成长的道路上。请以“My first ________”为题用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
a.请先将标题填写完整；
b.分享你的第一次尝试的经历；
c.你的感悟。
注意:
（1）词数100左右；
（2）文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息；
（3）照抄阅读语篇不得分。
My first ________
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【答案】例文
My first mountain climbing
We are usually deeply impressed by what we experienced for the first time. For me, my first mountain climbing left a deep impression on me.
Three years ago, my class went climbing. It was my first time to do things like this. I felt very excited at first and supposed it would be easy. However, as time went by, I was so tired that I wanted to give up. My teacher encouraged me to challenge myself. Encouraged by my teacher, I did it at last and couldn’t express my excitement in words!
From my first mountain climbing, I learned not to give up when facing difficulties. Only when I keep doing it and finish it can I have a sense of achievement.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给的提示，分享你的第一次尝试的经历及你的感悟，注意写作之前先补充完整题目。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先补充完整题目，再直入主题来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体分享你的第一次尝试的经历；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①leave a deep impression on给人留下深刻印象
②go climbing爬山
③as time went by随着时间的流逝
④encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
⑤give up放弃
[高分句型]
①We are usually deeply impressed by what we experienced for the first time.（what引导的宾语从句）
②I was so tired that I wanted to give up.（so...that引导的结果状语从句）
9．（2022春·江苏南通·九年级校联考期中）树立自我保护意识，健康快乐地成长是每个青少年的必修课。下面是某地关心下一代工作委员会为青少年编写的《青少年自我保护 健康成长手册》的部分内容。作为一名中学生， 请您写一篇相关主题的文章，内容包括：
①陈述你是怎样践行手册中提及的三条事项的；
②补充至少一条你认为重要的其他事项。
要求：
1.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3.词数在90个左右，文章开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数。
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.
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In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.
【答案】例文
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.
First, I always obey the traffic rules and I never run the red light. When the traffic light is red, I won’t go until it turns green. I always cross the zebra walk because it’s safe. Second, I often eat healthily and safely. It’s important to eat more fruit and vegetables. Eating too much fast food will do harm to my body. Third, I never meet strangers alone, especially friends who I make on the Internet. At the same time if we are true friends, we should help each other.
What’s more, I’d like to give you some advice. Now summer is coming, it’s dangerous for us to swim alone, especially in deep lakes or rivers. So don’t do that.
In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文。
②时态：本文以一般现在时为主。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，开篇说明自我保护的重要性，以及说明要分享一些想法；
②第二步，结合所给要点具体说明要如何自我保护；
③第三步，总结全文，表示只要这么做了，我们会安全健康地成长。
[亮点词汇]
①obey the traffic rules 遵守交通规则
②the zebra walk 斑马线
③do harm to 对……有害
[高分句型]
①When the traffic light is red, I won’t go until it turns green. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Third, I never meet strangers alone, especially friends who I make on the Internet. (who引导的限制性定语从句)
③At the same time if we are true friends, we should help each other. (if引导的条件状语从句)
10．（2022秋·江苏淮安·九年级统考期中）近年来，“双减”政策在很多学校得到了落实。“双减”实施后，自律者优秀， 懒散者出局。假如你是九 (1)班的李明，请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你是如何进行自我管理的。内容需包括以下要点：
1. 制定学习计划 学校课程、课外阅读、练习拓展；……
2. 合理时间安排 早、中、晚、周末；……
3. 养成良好习惯 早睡早起、坚持锻炼；……
要求：
1. 词数在80~100词，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括所有要点，并适当发挥，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
To be an excellent student, self-management is quite important._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
To be an excellent student, self-management is quite important. Today, I’d like to share with you how I have been managing myself effectively under the “dual reduction” policy that has been implemented in our school in recent years. I firmly believe that a well-thought-out plan can lead to better results. At the beginning of each week, I set aside time to create a detailed study schedule that outlines the school courses and extended reasding and exercises. In addition to having a study plan, I also focus on time management so that I can make sure to include breaks and leisure activities in my schedule. Moreover, I’ve developed many good habits like going to bed and waking up early and doing exercise regularly. In conclusion, the “dual reduction” policy has led me to adopt a more disciplined and organized approach to my studies. I believe that these self-management skills will continue to serve me well in the future, no matter what challenges I face.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，注意不要遗漏，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，即双减后自己的自我管理方法；
第二步，具体阐述自我管理的方法，包括制定学习计划，合理时间安排，养成良好习惯等；
第三步，文章总结。
[亮点词汇]
① lead to... 导致……
② at the beginning of…在……开始的时候
③ set aside…留出……
④ self-management skills 自我管理的方法
[高分句型]
① I’d like to share with you how I have been managing myself effectively under the “dual reduction” policy that has been implemented in our school in recent years. （how引导的宾语从句及that引导的定语从句）
② In addition to having a study plan, I focus on time management so that I can make sure to include breaks and leisure activities in my schedule. （so that引导目的状语从句）
③ I believe that these self-management skills will continue to serve me well in the future, no matter what challenges I face.（no matter what引导的让步状语从句）
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